I get it

one's stern one's soft i get it, it's kinda boring and why do they look like penis's

haha

the funny thing is that right at the end of the movie i had a pop-up come up inronic

Yup

Well to me i thought the movie was lacking alot of characteristics that makes a movie worth watching but since you really put time into this i gave you a higher score cause it is the point that you did try. The comedy and storyline didn't hit my interest but i'm only one person and i'm not gonna get on you about something that everybody else can like, my final problems is that you seem to stretch the whole story out and the movie itself looks slow which leaves me waiting for the next scene to come up, i think this movie can be compacted down to atleast half the time it was, in the end i feel like it has the possibility of being a great movie but it could of been touched up more to keep the viewer into the story but anyway good job keep going

No, you shouldn't of submitted this

Try Again

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Keep trying